Captain's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Are you hungry?]

Drawing is alright, but completely would not work as a t-shirt design. I don't know if you're planning on having these made, or use them for a contest or something, but you'll have to reduce the amount of colors you're using. I count 15+ colors. Assuming you find a place that will print a shirt with that many colors, it would be pretty costly for a shirt. If you want to get into t-shirt design, practice limiting your palette to 3-4 colors maximum, including the color of the shirt.

Gatho responds:

Thank you man this is only the model, the background isn't going to be there but the amount of colors will be only 4 but thanks by the way.

[The more ugly best]

Hey man

She may not be a looker but at least she's perky.

RockBullet responds:

very sexy I think ...

[Phelgrum and Cauldronis!]

Nice

Way more detailed than your usual fair. Good to see you step away from your more stylized work and do something much more involved lighting/shading-wise. Turned out really sick. Always awesome to see a great artist continue to get better, way to be an inspiration.

*high brofist*

jouste responds:

awesome! thanks for the brofist pal!

yeah this one took a lot longer than my usual stuff. good ot hear it paid off ;D

*super brofist back*

[Page3 Sakura]

Truly a masterpiece

Impeccable composition and heart-wrenching subject matter. The sparkles really exemplify the dreamlike landscape you've excellently rendered, and the bold text exquisitely placed upon the canvas truly tell a story that aches at my soul.

10/10 - nothing but perfection

peppypippy32 responds:

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[LURV BEN]

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Rucklo responds:

YES I AM PRO ARTWURKJOBMAKER N MAEK MONIES FROM IT. BEN IS TEH SEX00R-H4WTZ00R

[Super Hamster-Man thing]

Looks nothing like M-bot

Try harder

TurkeyOnAStick responds:

DAMMIT

[Breast]

Looks good

but some parts seem a little off. The armpit area is a little wonky looking, like her arm is too skinny....can't quite put my finger on it.
Top of her shoulder looks too square to, there's a very definite line from the bottom of her collar bone to the top of her shoulder that just looks very straight and awkward.
Nose ring also look a little off, but I wasn't there so it could be perfect :P

ornery responds:

the crappy picture messed with the shading, ill get it scanned soon for a better quality and some of those issues will clear up when the real shading is more visible.